Instructions: Make a well-written personal statement using what I already provided to showcase a key aspect of my character. It’s a 650-word essay. Metaphorical: This essay picks an important object in the student’s life and relates his/her experiences and transformation of maturity to the object. and picks out multiple key events in the student’s life that connect to one overall theme. (For me is adaptability)
It should include:
A depiction of your character before a pivotal event.
The event itself and its immediate consequences.
How the event transformed you.
Your future direction, is informed by this transformation.
Structure your essay with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion, ensuring each section supports the overarching theme and value you’ve chosen to highlight.
You need tp add an interesting hook. This, however, is more simple than it seems. When you brainstorm your hook, ask yourself, “If someone read just my hook, would they be curious to read more?”. A hook may just be a simple statement, a quotation, a vivid descriiption of the scenery, etc. AVOID USING A POPULAR QUOTE OR TRUTH AS YOUR HOOK)
As you begin your body paragraphs, you want to descriiptively lay out the main event that resulted in your character transformation. This is where you want to use extremely vivid sentences. In describing the main event, it is good to include the immediate effects of the consequence. Not all consequences have to be negative. (AVOID SIMPLY STATING WHAT HAPPENED).
This is the absolute most important part of your personal statement. You want to describe how you changed as a person as a result of the main event. Do not just say, “I became more passionate about service”, but show that you became more passionate about service by describing the homeless shelters you volunteered for or the elderly couple you helped get groceries for every weekend. Remember that you need to focus this part on only YOU!
Reiterate how the event has shaped you today and how you’ll leverage the lessons learned as you move forward. This is a MUST. It’s your chance to leave a lasting impression on the admissions committee, highlighting your resilience, growth, and potential for future success.
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