Pick a paragraph from your Persuasive Research Paper to revise for cohesion using the principles and methods from the reading.

Pick a paragraph from your Persuasive Research Paper to revise for cohesion using the principles and methods from the reading. Then provide the following in a document:
https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/the_writing_process/proofreading/revising_for_cohesion.html
A copy of the original paragraph from your paper
A copy of the revised paragraph from your paper
A 150-word explanation of which methods you used to make the paragraph more cohesive, clear, and connected, and how you plan to use what you’ve practiced here to revise the rest of your paper. Clearly identify the names of the methods you used.

Persuasive Research paper to revise below

In conclusion,Counseling for nurses in a hospital setting is crucial.it is an indispensable component of comprehensive patient care.by addressing the psychological and emotional needs for patient, nurses, and all health care personnel, counseling improves the treatment outcomes and supports the mental health for nurses.Implementing and having these resources in place not only benefits the patient, but also foster a healthier work environment for the employees leading to a more compassionate and holistic approach at the workplace.The institution of counseling services for the nurses helps in the management of these mental health issues that are endemic in the field. In other words, the nursing staff’s improved well-being will make the hospitals’ work environment better; performance will increase, and, as a result, patients’ health will be positively affected. Healthcare institutions should acknowledge and understand that their employees, the nurses, need such mental health support and take the necessary steps towards implementing such programs.

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